by Admin » Wed Mar 20, 2019 8:29 am
Thanks for your message about Net addiction Jaime, very interesting. It sounds like you know a lot about this subject! Most of your message is well-written and clear, but the first sentence is very long:
"The addictions are a complex disease, because it involves aspects of genetics and the environment, in patients with addictions, the brain gives a sense of pleasure, is the reason that patients, look for more quantity of the substance, is the same situation With all the substances, for example: alcohol, tobacco, lotteries, drugs among others."
You could make the sentences shorter and easier to understand:
Addiction is a complex disease, because it involves aspects of genetics and the environment.
In patients with addiction the brain gives a sense of pleasure, which is the reason why patients (look for more quantity of the substance) want to repeat the experience??? NOTE: The problem here is that people are not only addicted to substances, but also to activities.
The same thing happens with (different substances, for example:) alcohol, tobacco, lotteries (gambling, shopping), drugs among other things."
In general, avoid loooong sentences, they are difficult to control!
See you,
Pieter
Thanks for your message about Net addiction Jaime, very interesting. It sounds like you know a lot about this subject! Most of your message is well-written and clear, but the first sentence is very long:
"The addictions are a complex disease, because it involves aspects of genetics and the environment, in patients with addictions, the brain gives a sense of pleasure, is the reason that patients, look for more quantity of the substance, is the same situation With all the substances, for example: alcohol, tobacco, lotteries, drugs among others."
You could make the sentences shorter and easier to understand:
Addiction is a complex disease, because it involves aspects of genetics and the environment.
In patients with addiction the brain gives a sense of pleasure, which is the reason why patients (look for more quantity of the substance) want to repeat the experience??? NOTE: The problem here is that people are not only addicted to substances, but also to activities.
The same thing happens with (different substances, for example:) alcohol, tobacco, lotteries (gambling, shopping), drugs among other things."
In general, avoid loooong sentences, they are difficult to control!
See you,
Pieter