Oneka

Oneka

Postby Veganism » Sat Jul 22, 2017 10:37 am

-What does the diet consist of? What can and cannot be eaten?
Vegan diet consists of not eating animal products. That even includes daiary,fish, gelatin and eggs. They eat lots of fruit, seeds, vegetables, beans and grains.

-What is the philosophy behind the diet?
There are who only follow the vegan diet, but there are also who are ethical vegans. The term ethical vegan applied to those who not only do they follow a vegan diet, but they also extend the philosophy in other areas of their lives. They oppose the use of animals for any purpose.

-What benefits are claimed fo it?
It couls help shed pounds chronic diseases. It has health and environmental benefits.

-What do critics of the diet say about it?
Critics of the diet say that is really restrictive and that cooking vegan dishes can be lots of work.

-Can you find the name of any famous people who follow the diet?
There are many famous people who follow the vegan diet, such us, Stevie Wonder, Al Gore, Pamela Anderson and Alicia Silverstone.
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Re: Oneka

Postby Admin » Tue Jul 25, 2017 6:19 am

Good work Oneka. You express yourself very well in English - just one or two suggestions:
There are who only follow the vegan diet= There are some people who only follow the Vegan diet.. (This doesn't seem complete: ..follow the Vegan diet for what reason? We need a reason here.)
but there are also who are ethical vegans.= There are also some people who are Vegans for ethical reasons.
t couls help shed pounds chronic diseases= This is incomplete. You could say: It could help people to shed pounds and it could prevent chronic diseases
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