REALITY SHOW

[Eva]

I haven’t ever considered being a contestant on a reality show, because I think this type of programme is awful.

I mean show producer absolutely shouldn’t be allowed to involve children in reality show. I agree with psychotherapists that reality show has risk to the health of participants.
“Alone at home” is not a good idea at all. If parent allows their children to participate this reality for winning a big money, children will learn that best important thing is money.

[Admin]

Hi Eva, I agree, I can't stand this kind of programme. The most boring thing in the world...
Be careful with singular/plural and articles:
I mean show producer absolutely shouldn’t = This needs to be plural: show producers...
to involve children in reality show = ..in reality showS (need plural)
that reality show has risk to the health of participants= .. that reality shows can be risky for the health of participants
If parent allows = Singular: If A parent allows .. Plural: If parents allow...
to participate this reality for winning a big money= ..to participate in this show to earn big money...
best important thing = ..the most important thing is money
Bye,
Pieter

[Eva]

Thank you Pieter.
Eva